After having feedback, my tutor thought that the piece looked a little bit unfinished, so I decided to combine the flowers and the birds to the separate trees to link everything together. I also added in the little green leaves to add a bit more colour variation to the image. As I said in my last post about my hay festival project, I wasn’t quite happy with the writing I had done, so I planned on changing it. My tutor agreed that I should change the writing, maybe putting at the top of the image going across the trees, so I experimented with writing. I still wanted to use the handwritten text, but i tried different out different brushes and techniques, until I found one that I really liked. I will still be working on the image, but I like the way it is coming along. The image looks a bit cohesive which I like.